Thursday, July 23, 2009

$$$$money Money Money$$$$ Comments

Rating: 3.0

Money Money Money
You're just a a thing in itself
But why is it your controlling me
Bit by bit you consume my sanity...
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Mary Joy Lumanog
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C. P. Sharma 13 February 2010

You are my master, you are the creed, Cleverly you have eaten the human seed. cp

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Ted M 04 August 2009

Money is being given more importance these days. Lot of compromises being made for the sake of money. True write............10+++

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Tom J. Mariani 29 July 2009

I liked your poem. One minor correction. 'Your just a thing in itself' should be 'You're'

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Ency Bearis 27 July 2009

a very true write...good and evil had carried the subject...great poem....10

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Ejaz Khan 23 July 2009

A good write, money makes the world go round, the golden calf is eracted, bow down, without even questioning the sanity of this whole phenomenon!

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Mary Joy Lumanog

Mary Joy Lumanog

Bacolod City, Philippines
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