Saturday, March 9, 2013

(money) Laundering...... [white Collar? Crime; Inept 'criminal'] Comments

Rating: 4.4

The illicit drug dealer had just made a big cash sale score,
but his usual messenger had quit and walked out the door.
So the dealer turned to his cousin who was trustworthy but not smart.....,
saying 'Ned, take this bag of money to 10 Front St. Ask for Mark.'
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Bri Edwards
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Wes Vogler 02 December 2015

A fun write. Wes 20 characters 20 characters what a dumb machine now it's wrong verification.. it must be a blonde again wrong verification well you are not going to get much response this way. I shall blue line it and come bak

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Akhtar Jawad 20 September 2015

i must have read something or seen a movie which mentioned money laundering. my wife and i 'discussed' what the term meant. i did a little on-line research, and the poem and my experience with comedy movies and tv shows during my lifetime did the rest. It's amazing Bri, .

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Brian Jani 15 May 2014

What a topic Bri

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Noreen Carden 17 September 2013

Hey Bri well this is so funny well done its a great read

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Charles Darnell 05 July 2013

Very funny! Love the straight-man, Clark and his matter-of-fact oh, we get this every day attitude. Well done!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 10 March 2013

Bri! ! ! ! ! I have to add this perfect work to my favorite poems list and it should be at the top of them! man! ! ! you did a great job, the story is being told in a nice and cute way. and the end is just good! WOW! the rhymes....OMG! the rhymes are put in a brilliant way! well done pal!

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