Money And A Maid Poem by Aqua Flower

Money And A Maid

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Money and a maid
and I never get paid
all I want is love and respect
Instead I get complaints that I'm a defect
Well I'll be gone soon
I'll no longer be in the room
to hear your constant complaints
Your maid, I ain't
One day I'll be treated
The way I should have been before
No longer will I be greeted
With negativity galore

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Monday, May 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: abused,respect
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Taylor 27 May 2019

Great poem! I liked the rhythm. No longer will I be treated with negativity galore.

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Aqua Flower 01 June 2019

Thank you Brian. I guess he rhyme added to the rhythm in this one!

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Kostas Lagos 28 May 2019

Good one Aqua! Great!

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Bri Edwards 19 June 2019

nice rhming. nice venting! ! ! ! bri :) better days are ahead. smile......NOW! ! ! ! bri :)

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Matthew Holloway 06 June 2019

Very strong write, i hope you find the one to treat you right

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 June 2019

What a wonderful poem! Touching expression with lofty theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 June 2019

One day I'll be treated The way I should have been before No longer will I be greeted With negativity galore wow poem this is

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Aqua Flower 04 June 2019

Thank you for " Wow" I appreciate it!

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 May 2019

A nice piece with lovely rhythm. Good write, great read.

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Aqua Flower 01 June 2019

Thank you for reading and glad you liked the rhythm! :)

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