Monday, October 6, 2008

Money Always Comments

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Armed with a dollar sign,
Sugar daddies are dancing a jig-saw dance,
Stamping the sweet sixteens down to thirteen,
Blinding them with a pound sign,
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George Dumbarton
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Shingih Big-thigh 17 September 2009

your poem is partially good, your points are too general, try to avoid common words, otherwise, keep on showering us with your educative words.

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Manonton Dalan 08 November 2008

very descritptive and very beautiful poem. yes money that's what i need for gas, i lost a lot lately on my savings. thanks.md.

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George Dumbarton

George Dumbarton

Mutare, Zimbabwe
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