Saturday, August 10, 2013

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Indus river is flowing
to the north of india
and, our country is engulfed
in the sea of corruption,
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Ankit Neil Sharma
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Jenie Franksay 17 October 2013

a good thoughtful poem... add more feeling, increase poem length a bit.. keep writing.

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Dave Walker 10 August 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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