Tuesday, November 18, 2014

Money Comments

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He is a wealthy man but he cannot sleep,
Even if he sleeps it's not truly deep,
When he sleeps nightmares too frightening,
Disturb whole night like thunders n lightening,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Savita Tyagi 05 December 2014

How peaceful and sexy is the old man's deep, though no money, but wealthy nice sleep. Loved the lines. How cherished is the blessing of sleep compare to money, a sleep deprived one will know. Enjoyed the poem.

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Walterrean Salley 20 November 2014

1. Money is the means and not the end We only need money because everything costs. Within the body of your poem, you’ve showed us the pressures of a wealthy life. The simple life is sweet. Thanks you, Akhtar, for giving such a wise take on the subject.

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Khalida Bano Ali 20 November 2014

Yes money is the means not the end............10

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Amitava Sur 19 November 2014

A beautiful analogy on money. In Bengaly we say orthoi onorther mool means wealth is the route cause of all unwealthy things......... very nice

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Valsa George 18 November 2014

He shouts during sleeps then takes sleeping pills, How away he is from the lovely hills! A rich man tosses himself this side and that side on his bed unable to sleep. He is constantly plagued by nagging thoughts and has no mood or time to enjoy life! As you have rightly put, money is only a means and not an end! People with lesser money enjoy greater peace and tranquillity of mind than those who are immensely rich! A great write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2014

YES YOU ARE TRUE. A wealthy man not sleep at all. Due to stress and tension of his wealth. Money remains in his mind and it increases anxiety. Nice writing.

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