Monday, May 8, 2006

Monday Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun gives way to clouds
gray skies absorb the light
its chilly and I doubt
the sun will win the fight
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Keagan Meyer
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Geoff Warden 08 May 2006

Exelent write, such emotion portaying words well done

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Mary Nagy 08 May 2006

Nice job expressing the ominous feeling when a storm is approaching. I especially liked the lightening's flash catching your eye. Sincerely, Mary

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Keagan Meyer

Keagan Meyer

West Union Iowa
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