Saturday, July 9, 2011

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Rating: 4.5

Innocence costs nothing,
It's a gift from God,
It's the prelude to beauty,
It's not strained,
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
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Rekha Mandagere 13 July 2011

Great values innocence, beauty and love are symbolically depicted. Highly imaginative imagery inspires the readers. Thanks for sharing such a nice poem. Marks 10

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A wonderful write on innocence, delicate and charming. i give/10. i really injoyed this sweet poem, Mohd. Thank you

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An interesting viewpoint perspective on innocence which I enjoyed and rated 10. I once wrote a thesis on innocence which your poem reminded me of. A subject worthy of true contemplation. I will name titles of a few of my thoughts on innocence you may read if your interested. 'Innocence In The Eyes Of A Child', 'Innocence Inspires Paradise Harmonies', 'Innocence Is A Harmonic Restoration Seed', 'Innocence Is Affirmation Verification Of Light' and 'Innocence Matter: Restoration Perfection'. Regards Terence

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Leonard Dabydeen 10 July 2011

Intense write. It is the 'loving heart' that is so inspiring. TFS...Score = 10.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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