Monday, September 5, 2005

Mona Lisa-First Love Comments

Rating: 3.3

We'd been inside that place,
La Louvre, wow we said,
again and yet again, and there
she was, like in the story book,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 05 September 2005

The sentimental feel that comes acrossed through this poem is so wonderful Herbert. I have never been to those places but one day hope to. I will think of you whenever I see the Mona Lisa now..........Sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 05 September 2005

Beautiful poem, Herbert.....I enjoyed reading it!

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Theorem Thetruthserum 05 September 2005

Great poem...yet another poem that reminds me why I read your poems. Great job.

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Raynette Eitel 05 September 2005

I love this one, Herbert! The detail and the way you could recall how 'a boy's first love' came about was so well done. It is beautiful. Raynette

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