Tuesday, September 19, 2017

Mona Lisa Comments

Rating: 5.0

An old man on his deathbed
With his brooding kin
Elbowed in about him,
Bowing heads in shameful thought
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Troy Cochran
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2017

A shriveled man of poverty of no great name had his final legacy with a dying breath imparted his portrait of magical artistic work to society. He grinned. Perception in tranquility was amazing to illustrate the illusion in art. An old man's view was really brilliant on canvas of emotion. Wisely penned interesting poem is shared is excellent one.10

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Troy Cochran 26 September 2017

If I happen to go down in a hospital gown, like this man, I hope to leave such a legacy as a cryptic smile to top off a life well written and well lived. Just have to cultivate that tranquility a little every day along the way. There's no happy ending to a miserable journey! :)

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