Saturday, March 14, 2009

Mona Lisa Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you look at all the great deeds we have done.
And if I do this well enough, this could be one.
I think about all the people displeased.
With all the works of art that people have released.
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Cheryl Davis Miller 25 March 2009

Black Rabbit, I enjoyed all your poetry, but this one really spoke to my heart.You did us all proud, and answered the eternal question, [often heard or unheard, it's in their face's]'Why'.Perhaps this would help them understand, and even join us. Great work, don't stop. Cheryl

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Jake Erkens 14 March 2009

At first I thought this would be terrible, since Mona Lisa is so famous and that some person decided to make her seem terrible through a single poem; however, this was an EXCELLENT POEM! Great potrail. Mona Lisa will never be forgotten. :)) I enjoyed this poe, thanks for sharing it. Keep up the good work, Davke

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