Wednesday, June 23, 2010

Mommy Look What I Can Do! Comments

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Mommy look what I can do!
I just made do-do
then I played hide-n-seek
I saw you take a peek
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Kait Bebelheimer
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Kirsty Richards 23 June 2010

I like this, has a bit of everything. Great piece x

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Great imagery as well as emotion. Good progressive write, could feel the heart of the poem. Expressive! Good one; D

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