Thursday, August 6, 2020

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Mother

June eighteen, nineteen sixty four
i was born, i dont know what for.
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Deluke Muwanigwa
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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2020

Of course, she loves you, and when your siblings are too many, she just lacked time to let you feel that you are also loved by her. Of course you still remember the warm sphere at home, the fightings amongst your siblings. Aside from all these words I scribbled here, you wrote a heart-wrenching poem which attracts the attention of the readers. TFS, Deluke Sir! 5 stars

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 15 August 2020

This poem tugs at the heart, with its eloquently expressed longing for a missing mother. Thank you for sharing.

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