Saturday, November 7, 2009

Momentum Rush Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is no more blood running thru your veins
No more deep thoughts in your brains
My pulse crushing this momentum
thru my thrust of thirst for your blush
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Ana Sanchez
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Dr Antony Theodore 12 October 2020

There is no more blood running thru your veins No more deep thoughts in your brains My pulse crushing this momentum thru my thrust of thirst for your blush Powerful expressions. a fine poem. tony

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Ana Sanchez 08 November 2009

Thank You! ! Enjoy..each line comes from the heart

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Kaleb 'Villainous' Gonzalez 07 November 2009

Very lovely poem i enjoyed it very much

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Adens Kamwi 07 November 2009

passion flows through each line...lovely write, very enjoyable

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Ana Sanchez

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