Thursday, May 18, 2006
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Rating: ★2.9
Theres a gentle song to your stressful day,
When the sultriness of rolling wind can't be turned away.
What a captivating moment
And it sees me through,
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18 May 2006
Third stanza 'one' missing at the end of first line. Tidy up the punctuation and you have a sweet poem of loving, just don't expect too much. It is a bad idea. Believe me! Tai
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7/30/2025 5:05:01 PM # 1.0.0
Expressive poem of love. Keep it up Rain Storm.