Embraced by the fate of ageing,
My camera-phone struggles to respond in time,
Causing the best scenes to go missing,
Which I am sure will never recur anytime.
...
Read full text
very well expressed...you are doing the next best thing to painting...poetry! ! ...painting of words
Exceedingly beautiful lines, very nice.......... The shutter blinks eons after being clicked, Preventing me from freezing the time; But those unexpected moments it picked, Are images rendered artistically prime.
my mind's dark room recreating the scenery- thisa line stands out in an otherwise absolutely lovely poem, with right dose of humour, expression of feelings like being perplexed. take comfort that photographs on camera could get deleted, it could again cheat. but what is there in your store consciousness, you can revel in again and again.
moments r uncaptured but r always captured in our hearts... i loved this poem.... well written.
yr picture is well captured in words here as a photographer... artist is one who can bring the right effect in any art... :)
Very beautiful poem. I like the flow and the wonder ful words in this piece. Excellent job.
beautiful -- phtographic musings on canvas of poetry -10 anjali
@ Ms. Indira Renganathan: Thank you Ma'am.... for all your support and sweet comments. With Love, Ranjit
You have beauty in your painted words too..and the reader can well capture your picturesque heart... that your mind is juvenile and alert to set right your camera, recreate a snapshot of captured hearts of the readers...thank you
Capturing the instant...which you try to do, all too conscious that time is ephemeral.
@ Prof. Indira Babbellapati & Ms. Marilyn Lott: Thank you for all your support and comments. With Love, Ranjit.
Ah yes, time changes everything, doesn't it? You did a splendid job describing the aging process. We must make the most of our time here on earth. '10! ' for you, my friend. Warm Wishes, Marilyn
you used a wonderful metaphor to contemplate on the process of aging and how one's reflexes, howmuchever one refuses to admit, go slow as one ages. the best phot or painting is the one the mindscape retains forever!
Your perception and truth are invariably intertwined in this artfully depicted piece that is written with style and conviction. thanks, mandara