Sunday, April 22, 2007

Moments Of Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Did you know
That there is a Firmamant
Between us?
Amid silent box springs
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Meggie Gultiano 19 August 2007

great imagery here, Theodora..nice! hugs, Meggie

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Theodora Onken 22 April 2007

Thank you! And thank you for your good proof read! Truly apprecuated! Blessings, Theo

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D Matthew Cahill 22 April 2007

great imagery. felt like i was in the room. Q: in the last line of 2nd stanza, did you mean '....sleep never comes easy? ' typo maybe?

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