Tuesday, November 15, 2016

Moments Of Life Comments

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That moment when you meet the love of your life
But you're scared of future pleasures
That moment when he's your first but you think it'll hurt
His mother kicks him out at the thought of my possible pregnancy
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Kim Barney 15 November 2016

This appears to be your first poem on this site, and it is a very good one. Very powerful and full of passion. Welcome, and congratulations on a good start! Write more!

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