Saturday, August 22, 2015

Moments Of Collision Comments

Rating: 4.7

We were crossing
On the door way
A screen was hanging
I had not seen you
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Bharati Nayak
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Edward Kofi Louis 23 October 2016

Wrong verses right! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 21 October 2016

People come into our lives and then they go, but the one that will stay with you for a long time, is the one that is felt in the heart. For even if one does not look for love, it will find you. If it is your destiny to meet someone it will always find a way. A true beauty of a poem.

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2016

could the beginning have anything to do with meeting an arranged spouse-to-be for the first time? could be! i like this very much, and it is to be in the Section B of September 2016's Showcase for PH poets. thanks. bri ;)

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Bharati Nayak 30 August 2016

Thank you Bri Edwards for selecting it to your September Showcase.Many people and events we encounter daily.Yes, some collisions make our life beautiful and memorable while some encounters we may like to forget.

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Susan Williams 26 July 2016

What Sayeed said! ! ! ! ! The surprises of life are not guaranteed to be sweet ones but they are often life-changing. I love how you introduce your theme with that collision at the doorway- -perfect image, Bharati A perfect 10 for this meeting between us at the doorway of your poem!

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Bharati Nayak 14 August 2016

Thank you Dear Susan Williams.You are a valuable asset for this website.Your well judged comments on my poems make my day.

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Sayeed Abubakar 08 January 2016

Really a great piece of poem, Didi. It was created from within the core of your soul. That is why, it is so touchy.

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Bharati Nayak 14 August 2016

Thank you Sayeed.I am missing your comments on many of my new poems.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 06 November 2015

yet force of attraction fluxes to collide as light of moon bounces upon blue of ocean what a lovely waves of ocean course to recourse as curve of shadow carves to crave.........beautiful articulation of expression,10+, thanks for sharing

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Bharati Nayak 06 November 2015

Thank you very much for your appreciation.

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Stephani Kievaughan 25 September 2015

Like it. I Like it a Lawt

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Bharati Nayak 25 September 2015

Thank you so much for your nice comments on my poems.

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Anish Debnath 16 September 2015

sometimes the topic of a poem is chosen so uniquely that it is speechless.it is really done in this poem.collisions are part of life.sometimes in physical or sometimes it is mental form.good or bad the outcome be.its really great work madam.10/10.

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Bharati Nayak 16 September 2015

Thank you very much for your great comments.

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Valsa George 26 August 2015

An accidental coincidence is turned into a vibrant experience! Such casual occurrences can sometimes turn life into a totally new direction! Enjoyed the poem!

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Bharati Nayak 27 August 2015

Thank you so much for your nice comment and more so that you enjoyed reading it.

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Ayman Parray 26 August 2015

A lovely poem, Bharati. For me, it felt like for a moment the sun smiled, when i read 'Moments of Collision'. Beautifully written, thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 26 August 2015

Thank you for your wonderful comment.Even small trivial encounters can give give great joy.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 August 2015

Wow imaginative n sensational! Maybe he meant u were lovely. ;) i can relate to such collisions. Nice to read frm u again. Hope u wil too my latest on Dr.Abdul Kalam.

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Bharati Nayak 26 August 2015

Thank you for your visit and your nice comment.I love your poems and surely read your new posts

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Sanjukta Nag 24 August 2015

The poet has converted a trivial moment of collision into a sweet one, just a collision that makes a morning lovely... nice thought with the undertone of a big philosophy of life.

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Bharati Nayak 24 August 2015

Thanks for your lovely comments.Hope to get more of your visits to my poet page and your valuable opinions on them.

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Sekharan Pookkat 23 August 2015

three paths for those who are polite two for polite and impolite and one for impolite and impolite

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Bharati Nayak 24 August 2015

Thank you for your visit to my poet page and leaving your comments which is highly valuable for me as a poet.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 August 2015

Curved here and there life is a zigzag line, No luminary can, to it exactly define.

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Bharati Nayak 24 August 2015

Yes, life's path is full of curves and bends, pleasure and pains.Thank you for visiting my page and giving your nice opinion.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 August 2015

Always cherish the moment of collision and wish there should be another one. Small encounter often gives pleasure that remains in heart and mind forever. Sweet drop! ! Much love.

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Bharati Nayak 23 August 2015

Thanks for liking the poem.Yes small moments can also big joys.

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Gajanan Mishra 22 August 2015

life is zigzag, right. good one..

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Bharati Nayak 23 August 2015

Thank you very much for your encouraging words.Hope to see more of your valuable opinions on my poems.

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