Moments Of Collision Comments
We were crossing
On the door way
A screen was hanging
I had not seen you
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People come into our lives and then they go, but the one that will stay with you for a long time, is the one that is felt in the heart. For even if one does not look for love, it will find you. If it is your destiny to meet someone it will always find a way. A true beauty of a poem.
could the beginning have anything to do with meeting an arranged spouse-to-be for the first time? could be! i like this very much, and it is to be in the Section B of September 2016's Showcase for PH poets. thanks. bri ;)
Thank you Bri Edwards for selecting it to your September Showcase.Many people and events we encounter daily.Yes, some collisions make our life beautiful and memorable while some encounters we may like to forget.
What Sayeed said! ! ! ! ! The surprises of life are not guaranteed to be sweet ones but they are often life-changing. I love how you introduce your theme with that collision at the doorway- -perfect image, Bharati A perfect 10 for this meeting between us at the doorway of your poem!
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Really a great piece of poem, Didi. It was created from within the core of your soul. That is why, it is so touchy.
Thank you Sayeed.I am missing your comments on many of my new poems.
yet force of attraction fluxes to collide as light of moon bounces upon blue of ocean what a lovely waves of ocean course to recourse as curve of shadow carves to crave.........beautiful articulation of expression,10+, thanks for sharing
sometimes the topic of a poem is chosen so uniquely that it is speechless.it is really done in this poem.collisions are part of life.sometimes in physical or sometimes it is mental form.good or bad the outcome be.its really great work madam.10/10.
An accidental coincidence is turned into a vibrant experience! Such casual occurrences can sometimes turn life into a totally new direction! Enjoyed the poem!
Thank you so much for your nice comment and more so that you enjoyed reading it.
A lovely poem, Bharati. For me, it felt like for a moment the sun smiled, when i read 'Moments of Collision'. Beautifully written, thanks for sharing.
Thank you for your wonderful comment.Even small trivial encounters can give give great joy.
Wow imaginative n sensational! Maybe he meant u were lovely. ;) i can relate to such collisions. Nice to read frm u again. Hope u wil too my latest on Dr.Abdul Kalam.
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The poet has converted a trivial moment of collision into a sweet one, just a collision that makes a morning lovely... nice thought with the undertone of a big philosophy of life.
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three paths for those who are polite two for polite and impolite and one for impolite and impolite
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Curved here and there life is a zigzag line, No luminary can, to it exactly define.
Yes, life's path is full of curves and bends, pleasure and pains.Thank you for visiting my page and giving your nice opinion.
Always cherish the moment of collision and wish there should be another one. Small encounter often gives pleasure that remains in heart and mind forever. Sweet drop! ! Much love.
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7/27/2025 11:49:48 PM # 1.0.0
Wrong verses right! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.