Wednesday, August 26, 2020

Moments Of Cherishments.... (2) Comments

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Moments Of Cherishments…. (2)

The first time Vinhie started to cry,
my heart was broken
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2020

In a Merry-Go-Round day Vinhie started to cry and your heart broke. Hearing this we felt sad. But you should not worry. After little playing he will stop crying. Children behave amazingly. Sometimes they cry and sometimes they smile. The helicopter had to go up and down again. Helicopter he liked more. He amazingly understood his Papa's word. This poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2020

" Journey becomes very, very pleasant and important when loveliest places surround you and affectionate people gather to join and greet you. Nearest neighbors are good. If grandson plays with them then there is no need to worry because good neighbors take care. At dinnertime, you have rightly picked up Vinhie. An excellent memorable poem is well penned...10" @**

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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