Sunday, October 28, 2012

Moments Melt Ere We Know Comments

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We often wake up heart in hand
From the dross of a messy dream,
Like a crab from the moist morning sand,
Grasping a sinking, gossamer dream, grim,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 20 February 2019

A clear vision. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

Thank you Edward Louis, you really dig out things from a pile. And hello, it's good to meet after a week's gap.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 February 2019

Like a crab from the moist morning sand, Grasping a sinking, gossamer dream, grim, wonderful examples, similies and allegories in your poem.. love it. tony

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

And you too Dr tony Brahmin, expert in looking for a stone from the piles of a mine and to see if it is precious enough. Thank you so much.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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