We often wake up heart in hand
From the dross of a messy dream,
Like a crab from the moist morning sand,
Grasping a sinking, gossamer dream, grim,
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Like a crab from the moist morning sand, Grasping a sinking, gossamer dream, grim, wonderful examples, similies and allegories in your poem.. love it. tony
And you too Dr tony Brahmin, expert in looking for a stone from the piles of a mine and to see if it is precious enough. Thank you so much.
A clear vision. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you Edward Louis, you really dig out things from a pile. And hello, it's good to meet after a week's gap.