Moments in time
Things could have been different,
And if I could change things I'd go back again,
Chances I missed
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A very poignant piece Andy, moments in time, when we reflect on what could have been, I found this very touching and written from the heart, 10 Lynda xxx
Oh ANDREW! ! ! ! ! This one is for me.... LOL... It is so beautifully written with so many picutures of life passing by. I love the romantic feel you have given this master piece... Beautifully done and leaves the reader with such a warm feeling inside... I have read this twice enjoyed each time as the one before.... A 10 PLUS......
oh! ! ! ! ! i wish i can have time machine too, so that i can travel back and relive the precious moments or else change the things that made the present times sort of miserable.. anyway this is a nice write indeed andrew! ! ! .. with love shan
Andrew my dear friend, I am forever amazed by your genius ability to paint the most beautiful visions....I have always admired your craft, you are a poet close to many hearts my friend.....and I wish you every success in all that you do......excellent penning as always 10+++
Even though this is written in a melancholy mood the beauty of Spring lifted the mood for here. There is an acceptance in the last stanza of the moments having passed but life goes on regardless. As usual Andrew this is a fine poem comparable to any Master poet from moments in time. 10 Karin Anderson
A lovely rhythmic poem, I felt like singing to it somehow, although the contents were sad. How we can all look back wishing we had done things in another way, or as you say, another time, or another place. Another wonderful poem from your magic pen. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
A beautiful and wistful poem. The comparison of lost love with the seasons is a lovely touch. S :)
Perfect in tone and pitch this beautiful poem sums up life of so many people through the ages.100*