Nice love poem Marcus. I think you want 'times have' instead or 'time has' however. I really love this:
For one more moment, in your arms
One more whisper, soft and dear
One more memory, eternally clear
In your gentle and warm embrace
I almost think you could have ended the poem right here. It says it all for me.
a poet friend// RH Peat
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Nice love poem Marcus. I think you want 'times have' instead or 'time has' however. I really love this: For one more moment, in your arms One more whisper, soft and dear One more memory, eternally clear In your gentle and warm embrace I almost think you could have ended the poem right here. It says it all for me. a poet friend// RH Peat