Monday, November 15, 2010

Moments Before Forever Comments

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I cannot deny the fact, that I
think about you
In a constant milieu of memories
created by you
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Marcus McKinley
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R. H. Peat 29 November 2010

Nice love poem Marcus. I think you want 'times have' instead or 'time has' however. I really love this: For one more moment, in your arms One more whisper, soft and dear One more memory, eternally clear In your gentle and warm embrace I almost think you could have ended the poem right here. It says it all for me. a poet friend// RH Peat

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