Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, September 10, 2009

Moments After Comments

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Who know what will happen moment after?
Cries may be all over after day of joy and laughter
Destruction all over and mass slaughter
When hate spreads its wings and revenge there after
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Noel Horlanda 23 September 2009

What happens morning after, elation or death? Encourage lots of imagination this piece is. It contains strong rhyming words adding to the beauty of each line. I like this piece, I enjoy the read.

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Indani Narayan 14 September 2009

No one knows what is likely to take place There may not be any body to offer solace Better to prepare for worst to follow Not let up or uncertainty allow

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Lalvani Rekha 14 September 2009

Who know what will happen moment after? Cries may be all over after day of joy and laughter

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Vijay Suwarnkar 14 September 2009

Life is full of uncertainty No one is sure of its continuity Happy moments should he shared fully Life may believed in sense truly

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Sulochna Pandit 14 September 2009

Who ever is alert is bound to succeed? Careful planning cautiously proceed May not yield what is expected Danger may not take over as suspected

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Raju Rajput 14 September 2009

Half way is through if alertness is there Easy solution and path way clear Full confidence without any fear

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Jigisha Vyas 14 September 2009

Who ever is alert is bound to succeed? Careful planning cautiously proceed

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Maulin Shah 14 September 2009

No one knows what is likely to take place There may not be any body to offer solace

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Suwarna Patil 14 September 2009

Who know what will happen moment after? Cries may be all over after day of joy and laughter Destruction all over and mass slaughter

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 14 September 2009

Life is full of uncertainty No one is sure of its continuity Happy moments should he shared fully Life may believed in sense truly----> I enjoyed the whole poem but this stanza touches me more a wise perspective of life... noone can predict the future. There are no guarantees. Good Luck.

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Shilpa Maheswari 14 September 2009

Destruction all over and mass slaughter When hate spreads its wings and revenge there after

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Kunwar Patel 14 September 2009

Who know what will happen moment after? Cries may be all over after day of joy and laughter Destruction all over and mass slaughter

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Suresh Vakil 13 September 2009

Who ever is alert is bound to succeed? Careful planning cautiously proceed May not yield what is expected

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Rupa Shah 13 September 2009

Who know what will happen moment after? Cries may be all over after day of joy and laughter Destruction all over and mass slaughter When hate spreads its wings and revenge

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Sonu Dhanraj 13 September 2009

Full confidence without any fear Mental preparedness for hardship to bear

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Kant Shri 13 September 2009

“Leave all worries to me” I shall look Every message is thus read in book

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Durga Sethani 13 September 2009

Life is full of uncertainty No one is sure of its continuity Happy moments should he shared

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Argum Sheth 13 September 2009

Who ever is alert is bound to succeed? Careful planning cautiously proceed May not yield what is expected

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G Kandoi 13 September 2009

Happy moments should he shared fully Life may believed in sense truly

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Jayant Manik 13 September 2009

Life is full of uncertainty No one is sure of its continuity

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