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flood gate of memories, such gleaming grin I haven't seen, any where in this world so far. The lovely blue shade of your eyes The sky might have borrowed from you'. bubbling waves of restless sea to my surprise there you were, in my wonderful dream again! just wonderful and beautiful expressions of love, lost love and then again there you are! ! ! What a surprise for the reader. tony

excellent imaginations triggered by a single thought of yours..

a lot of comments already.. so what I can add is simply that I enjoyed reading such a beautiful poem..

am speechless - excellent write describing the love that blooms in the two - simply incomparable - every line I read I was getting shivers running down my spine out of pleasure - how lucky the two are to be in deep love - May the love always remain.

Mallika - it's a lovely love poem with sheer joy and honesty. An intense love was observed between two who were basking in their ocean of love with closeness in their body and mind. Thanks for sharing.

superb love poem. A pleasure to read

Though it is a dream a beautiful poem is created in wonderful words by the poetess and so good.

Just a single thought of you opened the flood gates of memories- Like waves they come one after another.time stands still in the moments of pure bliss when the poet says- My elevated emotions came up with me too Then all of them flew out as a laughter of time Past, present, future and all three Stood there silently for a while dear- -an excellently beautiful poem on love.

Love is a beautiful thing, so is your poem.... Your imageries are excellent... I love it.

I don't believe I have read a more beautiful love poem, Mallika. You are a talented writer and a fortunate woman to have such love. Thank you for sharing. Peace

'Is there anything in this universe as sweet as my lover's smile? .. lovely praise for lover...10 wonderful poem to concern all with response to call and love above all

So beautiful and very nice. Excellent piece Poetess Malikka

Wow! A wonderful write.Enjoyed reading it immensely. All the elements of nature blended together to compliment the lovers.Blessed you are if you are in reality experiencing this divinity. Such flowery language. A poet's delight. Thank you

An excellent poem which really moved me.Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

you clearly depicted your sense, feeling and realizations, , , , depth of intensity clearly to hug one-another well-perceived as I remember one such moment I once met, , , one of the fond ones like it... thanks

Your new poem is marvelous! It is both a classic love poem a-n-d a personal love poem; it contains both tradition and originality in perfect balance. One classical element is your intense focus on just two people, their sheer joy, their sense of being one, of being unique, of being at the center of the universe with BIG THINGS that usually dwarf us - sun, moon, oceans - players in their Love Games. This is the boldness of lovers but it is also their sense of humor which is implied by this overstatement. The man is proving his devotion and gratitude; the woman receives and returns it. She is quietly pleased; he is boisterously pleased; together they have achieved their hearts' desire. B-U-T in addition to these classical elements, which link your lovers to lovers everywhere, you express the psychology of love with sensitivity. The woman especially knows that this moment cannot last: sleep will overwhelm them, day will dawn and pull them apart, the universe will be silent. Night's magic recedes in day's reality. Still, like a true romantic, you have made a persuasive case for the power of romantic love, and I am one of many readers who will be convinced of its truth. Brava, Mallika, Poet of the True Heart!

nice caricaturisation. A teenager's dream. But life is harder in black & white. Still, poetic. Best wishes. Global Poet dr.k.g.balakrishnan kandangath

This poem has brought out your inner feeling very well, your expression of the same is remarkable. I totally agree with Raymond Farell's last line in his comment.

This poem reminds me of a passage in the Old Testament which states that the way of a man with a maid is a thing of marvel. You have certainly given a beautiful portrait of a man in love with his beloved, who is extolling her beauty, it ends happily as well for the dreamer. If there is any part of this that is a reality in your life then you are indeed a lucky woman.