Tuesday, March 7, 2017

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Why can't I live in the moment?
I keep searching for emotion that is profound in trivialities.
I read ahead or fall behind, either way missing the meaning.
My shore lays exposed, easily ravaged by the yawning sea,
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Jette Blackstone 11 December 2017

I think we all wear a mask. Being in a human body requires that we relish the skin we are in. Maybe this is the torment of a captured soul...stuck within a body...filled with desire and a nervous system, makes us experience the world in such a vivid way, There is no option but to live in pain and sometimes to relish the ecstasy. Beautiful writing Grace. - Pam (Jette)

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 October 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Grace m. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 March 2017

Exposed! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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