Sunday, October 7, 2012

Moments Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moments of sheer exhilaration,
Riding finely tuned thoroughbreds, in a horse lovers nation,
Falling leaves, upon sweet smelling meadows like cunning thieves,
Sprinkles of raindrops tied in silky bows, intricately weaved,
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Hazel Durham
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Akhtar Jawad 09 March 2015

Life is rich in song and poetry a great patriotic poem...................10

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 November 2012

beautiful ink hazel.flow, wordplay are simply amazing.liked it.

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Hazel this is bursting with beauty! Well done my friend!

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Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose 01 November 2012

is there any where in the world of today dat carry such thrill? i sure do want to see such a place cos i tot God took dem all to heaven wen he removed the garden of Eden... nice one ma'am

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Kevin East 01 November 2012

'Always a fanfare in motion'..great stuff Hazel.

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Asif Andalib 31 October 2012

It's a pleasure reading your wonderful poetry my dear poetess. Beautiful write

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Asif Andalib 31 October 2012

It's a pleasure reading your wonderful poetry my dear poetess. Beautiful write

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Asif Andalib 31 October 2012

It's a pleasure reading your wonderful poetry my dear poetess. Beautiful write

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Indranil Bhaduri 29 October 2012

Moments of joy, moments of tranquility, moments of happiness amongst nature's beauty...fantastic.! ! ! !

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Karen Sinclair 27 October 2012

Impeccable explanation of joy, thoroughbred horses thundering... and i love this line so much Falling leaves, upon sweet smelling meadows like cunning thieves, tyvm karen

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Valerie Dohren 15 October 2012

So many lovely moments in this poem, wonderful imagery.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 11 October 2012

Wow an awesome metaphoric poem! I do smile at d thinness line, same here. :)

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Ency Bearis 10 October 2012

Inspirational verses, superbly written.

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2012

The horse is perhaps defeated by your words.Well done

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Valerie Dohren 07 October 2012

Beautifully written Hazel, very moving.

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