Sunday, March 15, 2009

Momentary Bliss Comments

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Momentary Bliss

why do you stare at me
what you look for in my eyes
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Rajkumar Mukherjee
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Wojja Fink 24 March 2009

let this momentary bliss linger in our mind forever.... sunshine in the mind's eternal weather.........thank you...John

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Kesav Easwaran 22 March 2009

strong emotions here...i liked the sun/dusk imagery in the concluding lines...good work...10

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Rajkumar Mukherjee

Rajkumar Mukherjee

KOLKATA, INDIA
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