Moment To Moment Comments

An exhilarating brilliant poem at such a fast pace.

As LeeAnn said, brilliant first line!

Brillian read espeically the first line Excellent hook

" Time a powerful enemy // Exhausting body and soul " this is exactly what Poomthaanam, a great poet of yesteryears in Malayalam meant, when he said, ‘as time ticks ahead, it eats into man's life-span'.