The crystalline tear that slipped away
And words that didn’t help them pause.
Hands of the clock that sashay
When you want to hear the endless applause.
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This poem is very sentimental and heartfelt. I like it very much, as I, too....tend to want to hold onto certain moments forever. You're a very talented poet.
some moments are engraved in our hearts forever! ! ! ! beautiful poem.....i like it a lot... keep writing! ! !
Some moments should be treasured, others we would rather forget however just to have had moments at all, makes me grateful of the thought Thanks for this wonderful poem.-Melvina-
I love the way your poem flows! I know how it feels too when you can't save a moment. Much love! Mandy
Hi Preeti, lovely poem..havent seen you for some time happy new year..and happy writing Arti
a lovely poem, Preets... and a nice reconciliation in the end... love... Asma...
Very thoughtful, 'Timeless'. I love your poems keep on writing them! ! !