The warmth in the first handshake in my school from
that beautiful blue-eyed girl of my dreams.
A chilled breeze on my ever depressed face
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Not as great as your previous works...... you are good with words, you know how to make a poem a complete bliss, but a casual writer you are not...simple illustration of words is not your forte' avoid it. Any given day I would rate your romantic poems higher than any of your style! I was expecting a better end Aparna
Putholi, I disagree with Prachi. This poem is in a simpler form than some of your others, but these moments you describe are the simple pleasures that have really touched you. This style can work better sometimes than a heavier poem, and I find these moments delightful. 'A drizzle to wash away tiredness' may not be appreciated by another person, but you do, and this is why the poem is special. 'The flute to bring out tears' is another example. Music can melt our souls and a sensitive poet as yourself treasures such moments. The last two lines are simply adorable and so is the poem. 10 Karin Anderson