Should I be carried on wings of the Dawn
To remote depth of the Sea,
There You would find me and keep me from harm
Your Hand would take hold of me.
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This is an remarkable poem, i enjoy reading this poem keep it up...
I think your style of writing is very good. It has a ring to it and a snappy cadence almost like music of some kind. I was looking at some of your other poems and the same style seems to carry through on most of your poems. Very good writing. Perhaps you could take a look at mine. I would value your opinion.
A tribute to Omnipotence for His omniscient wisdom as the divine Creator.. A wonderful write.
A poem of praise and thanks a homage to mother as vessel and child as hope a Christian tradition, but universally the hope that the child will become as in vitro, an individual connected by blood.
Deeply reverant and very moving. It touches on the very essence of our being. You still have it
An objective & universally shared idea of a mother-child relation is recorded in this poem very subjectively...usually children are ingrates but he says In awe I will praise Your Most Holy Name For the Wonderful Way I am made. the care & concern of mother gets us attached to the real Creator.
thank you for calling my heart back to my creator.......