Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Moment Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Should I be carried on wings of the Dawn
To remote depth of the Sea,
There You would find me and keep me from harm
Your Hand would take hold of me.
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Adeline Foster
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Folorunso Oladipo Daniel 19 December 2015

thank you for calling my heart back to my creator.......

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James William 06 February 2013

This is an remarkable poem, i enjoy reading this poem keep it up...

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Smoky Hoss 25 August 2012

A splendid hymn of beautiful praise!

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Dave Walker 12 August 2012

A deep meaningful poem, a beautiful write.

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Mark Normand 31 July 2012

I think your style of writing is very good. It has a ring to it and a snappy cadence almost like music of some kind. I was looking at some of your other poems and the same style seems to carry through on most of your poems. Very good writing. Perhaps you could take a look at mine. I would value your opinion.

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Walterrean Salley 26 July 2012

A tribute to Omnipotence for His omniscient wisdom as the divine Creator.. A wonderful write.

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S.m. Kozubek 24 July 2012

evokes a great spiritual presence

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Smoky Hoss 12 July 2012

A wonderful and beautiful poem.

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Danny Draper 08 July 2012

A poem of praise and thanks a homage to mother as vessel and child as hope a Christian tradition, but universally the hope that the child will become as in vitro, an individual connected by blood.

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Joseph Anderson 05 July 2012

Deeply reverant and very moving. It touches on the very essence of our being. You still have it

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The Reader 04 July 2012

An objective & universally shared idea of a mother-child relation is recorded in this poem very subjectively...usually children are ingrates but he says In awe I will praise Your Most Holy Name For the Wonderful Way I am made. the care & concern of mother gets us attached to the real Creator.

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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