Saturday, March 14, 2009

Moment Of Anger Comments

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One time you want to run away
To go and never look back
You feel that you hate people
And you hate yourself
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soumia benmechiche
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One time you want to run away To go and never look back You feel that you hate people And you hate yourself will be consdiered a cowardice act...never hate a person or self but reform it...10 read mine.... cowardice actt.... i am disgrace and partially truth... as a poet u have stunned me and grounded as well...hasmukh47@ym

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Malcolm The Last. 18 March 2009

Anger is difficult to control sometimes, especially when one blames themselves for situations gone wrong.

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Chitra - 15 March 2009

well worded...the innate emotion well described

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~ Jon London ~ 15 March 2009

True emotional pour fills the page with feeling,10

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Muhammad Ali 15 March 2009

pretty ideas arranged in your poem, nice work 10

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Justice For All 14 March 2009

very nice poem just keep writing.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 March 2009

Moments of anger can be overcome by trust and faith on God. Keep writing, Soumia. Best Wishes Naseer

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