Saturday, April 12, 2008

Moment Lost Forever... Comments

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A little girl stood
beside her
Arms outstretched.
Demanding, commanding
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Usha Pisharody
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Abha Sharma 15 April 2008

It is such a deep poem, Keshav Sir mentioned that he was touched for the daughter but I felt guilt from the mother’s end.... .. meeting all ends is really difficult sometime, busy mothers find difficult to spare time due to social responsibilities and work pressure.. The time is lost for ever…what you give..you soon get back in return.. The composition is outstanding… more is required to read in between the lines and definitely arouse maternal feelings.

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Kesav Easwaran 12 April 2008

a touching poem, usha...perhaps this night, i wiil go sleep thinking of that little girl only...

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