Moment In The Sky Comments

'The true path holds few and very gratifying rainbows, to be cherished for the all of ones life.' -Nagourta

so i could paint you a rainbow...... very catchy and thought provoking.

I think the title is very fitting and goes well with the ending “so I could paint you a rainbow”. The poem leaves the intended reader with a very nice thought. I am not able to fathom the meaning of the first four lines and its connection with the rest of the poem. “Feeling the right thank” - This doesn’t make any sense to me. What are you thinking about? If I knew who “they” are, maybe I would see the complete picture.