Wednesday, June 24, 2009

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This moment; in my hands,
-the smell of the burning wood.
-the taste of the wet soil,
-the color of the dew drops,
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Sadhana Mishra
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Anju Addanki 24 June 2009

hi poet This poem is small and neat. Its has cute words.oNly the last line felt a bit depressing.But over all its nice one.

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