Wednesday, February 18, 2009

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You gave birth to eight of us
I am sure there were times, you needed to cuss
You kelp us busy, as much as you could
We could have done more, like good kids should
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Frieda Lumpkins
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Greenwolfe 1962 20 February 2009

This is a most touching writing. There needs to be a rereading of this by the writer to catch a couple of word problems but I suspect that the writer has so much emotion invested in this that it will be hard to do. I know that I certainly felt the same about my mother and I couldn't read this more than once without a tear or two from me. A wonderful presentation! GW62

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