Wednesday, October 19, 2016

Mom You Come Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where did you go oh my mom?
I remembered you were ill dom.
I saw you last on the bed of death,
I did not notice shed in tree neath.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Isabel Pimentel 23 October 2020

Mother remains in love and emotion of child. Considering God as mother we realize truth.

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Valsa George 10 October 2019

I assume that you must have lost your mother at a young age! It must have indeed broken your heart! But you still remember how she taught you to be closer to God and you try to carry out her advice in your life as best as you can. You hope that she will be resurrected on the Last Day of Judgement....! A soulful write!

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

Mon is affectionate. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 October 2016

Mother is always the one the child will miss when absent. Your poem says it with great depth of feeling.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 20 October 2016

Touching.... A soulful write.... ++++++++++10

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 19 October 2016

No words to explain how great is worked out, I can notice the rhyming scheme here. Thanks for sharing poet.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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