Monday, November 30, 2015

Mom's Smiles Comments

Rating: 4.5

Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
no tears....
Smiles as she passed by
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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2023

Dear Poet, Congratulations! How are you getting?

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Prabir Gayen 16 April 2023

How are you?

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me poet yeps poet 21 March 2023

Why no one else is now commenting tell me

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me poet yeps poet 19 March 2023

Why no ore comments being posted now

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Thomas Case 12 February 2023

Excellent job with vivid imagery.

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me poet yeps poet 14 March 2023

SO KIND OF U TC SORRY SO BELATED

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Rob Lamberton 19 January 2023

Eyes that smile! Even the eyes of your own mother. I'll smile with the both of you!

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me poet yeps poet 14 March 2023

SO KIND OF UU SMILEE MAY UUUUUUUUUUUU R L

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 January 2023

I always love this poem. Very meaningful. It depicts another dimension of death. An end can open another avenue where we can meet and be together again.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 January 2023

This beautiful poem shows the unceasing great love of a mother and child. Very touching and heartwarming.

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me poet yeps poet 14 March 2023

REALITIES OF LIFE ROSE THANKS WHY POINTS ARE NOT 5 I WONDER MY BEST POEM EVER

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me poet yeps poet 18 January 2023

MY BESTEST POEM PAGES OF COMMENTS BUT NOT GRADED YET AS MAXIMUM SAD NO

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me poet yeps poet 05 November 2022

NO MORER COMMENTS ALL POETS AND FRIENDS MY BEST POEM

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 July 2022

I forgot how beautiful this poem was. It means a lot more now since my mum died

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me poet yeps poet 25 November 2022

may god bless her also thnx LAA

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 July 2022

A great and unique poem so beautifully crafted and expressed. A treasure and wonderful to read. Top Marks and to my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 July 2022

How lucky you are that you were able to witness and you were with your mother at her last moments. The great memory is indelibly marked in your heart and mind.

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me poet yeps poet 25 November 2022

Thanks RM for all your thoughts and kindness Rgds

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 July 2022

A vivid, beautiful, poignant and touching depiction of life, death and love. How very touching to see that a mother can still smile on her deathbed. She really made sure that your parting is happily remembered.

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me poet yeps poet 10 September 2022

kind thanks R M J A

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Gayatri Phukan 07 April 2022

Beautiful writing

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Gayatri Phukan 07 April 2022

Beautifuly drawing

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me poet yeps poet 23 March 2022

THANK YOU SOMEONE MUST RAISE THE LEVEL

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Bharati Nayak 04 January 2022

So poignant and so beautiful!

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me poet yeps poet 19 February 2022

KINDNESS MA'AM

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Evelyn Morianos 02 January 2022

Love this. Felt your love for your mother and your loss.

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