Sunday, July 9, 2017

Mom's Lullabye Comments

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One day I'll just fly away with you
Never leave you alone in bed
Attach you to my sail
Make loops in the
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Doris Cornago
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Lamar Cole 09 July 2017

Very nice and wonderful write.

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Doris Cornago 10 July 2017

I'm sure all our moms will agree. :)

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Doris Cornago 09 July 2017

I have devised this form of phrasing a poem to allow high and low notes as in a song to allow breathing and reflection after high emotions and to get back into a full swing slowly and be in flight again after resting. I hope that you will see the benefit of such high and low notes when thinking and expressing your thoughts. Write on.

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