Rushing towards the platform..
My mom yelling… " C'mon….
We are getting late..
For this train in a week this is the only date.. "
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lovely piece of art. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s
To change the heart of men who hate, they must let God in. If they refuse they will never piece together the fragments of their broken souls. Very good poem, emotional, suspenseful and thought provoking.
very nice.can this change the hearts of the brutes? liked it.
Wow! Such a sad poem its ur best work ever I loved it and I give it a 10
good, terrorist not for the greed......your poem is a good one, nice flow, good wording and good rhyme too, i like it, please read some of my poems too
Such a touching poem. There is much fuss in our life, so much fuss that we forget to love those whom we love... Your poem reminds us that we must appreciate our family and friends.
IT's a nice poem This poem is easy simple heart touching and fantastic