Thursday, May 24, 2012

Mom..! ! .... It's A Bomb…..! ! ! ! ! ............ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rushing towards the platform..
My mom yelling… " C'mon….
We are getting late..
For this train in a week this is the only date.. "
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Pooja Karnani
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Yog Poudyalz 10 July 2012

IT's a nice poem This poem is easy simple heart touching and fantastic

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 25 June 2012

lovely piece of art. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 22 June 2012

its a worthy note you made at the end! !

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Sharad Juneja 31 May 2012

really a masterpiece

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Captain Cur 24 May 2012

To change the heart of men who hate, they must let God in. If they refuse they will never piece together the fragments of their broken souls. Very good poem, emotional, suspenseful and thought provoking.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 May 2012

very nice.can this change the hearts of the brutes? liked it.

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Lady Keva 24 May 2012

Wow! Such a sad poem its ur best work ever I loved it and I give it a 10

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Wahab Abdul 24 May 2012

good, terrorist not for the greed......your poem is a good one, nice flow, good wording and good rhyme too, i like it, please read some of my poems too

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Saniya Galeyeva 24 May 2012

Such a touching poem. There is much fuss in our life, so much fuss that we forget to love those whom we love... Your poem reminds us that we must appreciate our family and friends.

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