Today is important day in my life
I found good partner in life as wife
It was great moment and your last wish,
Life is going smooth with fine finish
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Here I love to mention, ’ One can’t clad a widowed Mother with benarasi sharee how rich and affluent the kids are’ [in India] No substitute of Mother Just I quote from comment by one commentator [AB ~ London] on my poem Omni Pervading Mother in major languages of world the word mother starts with alphabet ‘M’ Maa [Bengali] Mа й к а [Bulgarian] Majka [Croatian] Matka [Czech] Moeder [Dutch] Mère [French] Mutter [German] Mháthair [Irish] Mā te [Latavian] Mа т ь [Russian] Madre [Spanish] Mati [Slovenian] Mor [Swedish] Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
Dear Mr.hasmukh amathalal, I have read your nice poem (Mom I miss you) … It touched my heart ….kindly read below a summary (with minor changes) of what I like the most…. Thank you. Adnan, Your seed plant has now grown into big tree A seed full of love and nice happy memory You were always there in all my dreams In darkest hours you were my candle lights Twinkling sparkling stars resemble to your lovely eyes They remind me of your tender warm smiles. Moon light shower with silver blessing, touches my heart like your very sweet kissing These were the happy moments I miss all along I was the most happiest person among But now alone I miss your touch Cause mom I loved you very much I have the desire to offer you a flower, I got married mom I will become a father. Now I got the meaning of your faith prayer.
A wonderful tribute to Mom, Hasmukh. Deep, intense emotions wrapped in memory. A good write. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Leonard
i guess she is an inspiration to you, to me my mother is the greatest. though i love and respect her beyond words can explain we still end up having arguments and silly fights, i love her more than anything nad anyone and hope our mothers blessings are always with us. great, emotional nad lovely.10++++
Moon light shower silver blessings, Body feels gentle touch with sweet kissing 10
the tribute is beyond words..., especially to mother and god, nice job,10+
You did feed me with honest means, Neither to yield and nor to lean, Fair view of situation and act,
It was great moment and your last wish, Life is going smooth with fine finish,
Today is important day in life, You found good partner as my wife, It was great moment and your last wish,
You did feed me with honest means, Neither to yield and nor to lean, Fair view of situation and act,
Your small plant is now grown into big tree, I look back with satisfaction and feel free, Mom, it was you who nurtured me well,
I cherish your memory when at ease how can I afford in memory to erase Beautiful memories of Mom to cherish. A truly memorable poem. thanks for inviting me to read.
Today is important day in life, You found good partner as my wife, It was great moment and your last wish,
Today is important day in life, You found good partner as my wife, It was great moment and your last wish,
You were always there to guide me in dream, In darkest hour you come as sun ray’s beam, --> Mothers / children >>>>>>> a strong relationship, a REAL LOVE free from all kinds of betrayal a wonderful poem! I liked the flow.... 10+++++
Lovely poem Hasmukh...so moving..a great tribute to your mother! Fortunately, my own mother is still alive. I dread the day when I will have to compose a poem in memory of her. I will strive to cherish her; inspired by your poignant poem!