shyam balaji

shyam balaji

coimbatore (now in chennai) ..
Saturday, November 29, 2008

Mom- I Love U. Comments

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The time when I laid on your laps, mother,
of the outside world I lest bother
That's time I was four.
You bet me, chided me, advised me,
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Dulakshi Wakista 20 February 2010

You've expressed and showed the bond of mother and child.Very lovely and heart touching poem.Indeed it's a great work.No one compare mother love to another. Great work! Nice piece.

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Sneha 'The Poetess' 17 February 2010

any poem written on the beauty of motherhood shud be applauded! ! ..... :) there's no love poem, nature poem, or even grievance poems that can come as close to wat a poem on motherhood can! ...

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Bistirna Barua 25 December 2008

a moving poem just like the song MAA in taare zameen par. Shyam really you are a poetical genius such fantastic word selection yet you retain the soul of the poem, your simplicity binds me.you rock

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Vidhya 01 23 December 2008

wonderful........very good work.........i really enjoyed ur poem......

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shyam balaji

shyam balaji

coimbatore (now in chennai) ..
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