Sunday, June 14, 2009

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My mother was a woman,
who always gave a smile.
but after she was gone
I cried for quite a while.
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Shay Chesney
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Danny H 13 August 2009

So Far this is my Favorite poem of yours. Each word shows hope, remorse and Tention Some people have good mothers, some people have caotic mothers im under the caotic mothers but, im fine. i have an amazing dad. Even though i love all my family and friends i knew in 14 years i lost 7 months ago im still happy.

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Brooke Luchich 21 June 2009

It's beautiful, I can't imagine how hard it all must be for you. I couldn't live without my mum! Keep writing you're very good.

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My mother was a woman, who always gave a smile. but after she was gone I cried for quite a while.... no one canreplace mom.. she has uniquae place here on earth.......u can't forget papa too. read mine o.mother, papa do u know & papa u too. u will get nswer aand 'cry not' will soothe ur feelings too. read n comment

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Obinna Eruchie 15 June 2009

beautiful and warm in a way that is touching.

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I Am Charlie 14 June 2009

ah...such flow. jealous is spelt wrong. But that unbroken flow is good. brief lines of that warm, sentimental feeling...makes me think about mine...when she's mad, normally. She looked pretty.

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Shay Chesney

Shay Chesney

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