Thursday, December 6, 2007

Mom... Comments

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Mom,
You cry and say that you don't know me,
but the 'real me' you choose not to see.
all you see is what you want me to be, but again, all you see is what you wanna belive.
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Autumn Keele
mom
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I love it

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Keith Hendrickson 10 September 2009

everytime i read a new one of your poems its my new favorite of yours. the way you used your flow on this one was spectacular. very deep, passionate and heartfelt. i loved it

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Amber Green 09 December 2007

So you still have to pretend you're straight, huh? You'd think that she'd get it once she caught us... you're mom is strange babe.

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Deanna Payne 06 December 2007

This is an awsome poem

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