Mom Comments

You ever could really see.....do you mean never? if this IS a fresh start for YOU, and not just a made-up story, i wish YOU well. the poem could use a bit better proofreading for what i think are just 'silly' mistakes. i enjoyed the poem....the rhyming and flow and story and short lines (though long lines might work almost as well) . if you hadn't mentioned 'mom' in the title i would have been a bit lost. i started to get 'lost' until i remembered the title. thanks for sharing. :) i hope you will have an enjoyable experience on poemhunter.