Molten Or Metallic Marvels Comments

An unusual topic and an interesting perspective.

that was golden honey on smoldering words........ glad u don't like dust.....

a fascinating topic handled nicely; i hope you never get burned! i like the idea of imagining honey as a substitute for a molten material. i just have trouble understanding the line: And they are in all shine can you explain it please? thanks for sharing. bri

It is all about beauty and taking the time to soak it up, like an ice cream cone

Excellent poem it's nice to read that your not materialistic

A strange fancy indeed! How ever the poem is quite novel in theme and style and makes a very enjoyable read! Thanks for the nice comment on my poem 'As I Lose Myself'

An obscure subject matter, however I like the very idea. A very good write, really enjoyed it.

A beautiful captivating read, I see your fascination comes in cleverly hear, there’s something about the natural power of the earth that is mesmerizing to watch. Your scintillating depictions are a marvel explored. Definitely worth a 10

I agree it really is unusual. But i like it. You took something very simple and you made it poetic

N how did u know i wasnt materialistic?

N how did u know i wasnt materialistic?

Gah stevie gah! I only like 'watchin' liquid gold n lava and only from afar n onscreen. ;)

This is unusual. It i kinda liked it! Have you considered taking up welding. I fact there are a number of jobs that could quench your molten thirst! I don't think the pay would bother you as you appear not to be materialistic?

perfect blend of ideas but all Greek to my humble wit Like an abstract art explained by Romantic kit however adorned with some vivid colors and images still hard to catch poet's messages either a poets' ambiguity or horror of uncertainty what ever the case might be It's not easy as cup of tea indeed your sweet fancies are bizarre as in Sahara driving a Ferari with succeeding twist of thoughts you versed the marvels at last and truly i also don't know why things are qeerly happened neath ' the sky