Molten Lava Comments

Rini this is a flowing poem of love that was good and beautiful in the beginning but went wrong with the passing of time. The memories will haunt you but time will heal your heart.

Hi, Rini! Reading your recent poems I came on this one. I like your shores never knew the depth of my pain. Are you familiar with Johnny Cash? He sang a song titled Ring of Fire. I think you’ll relate to it. -Glen

Life without you became terrible….Your memories are buried in the bottom of my heart. Then the last two lines! Exquisitely penned Rini…10

This is a very heartfelt poem with a sadful tone.

Could such wonderful verses be penned without reality? For a poet, there is additional advantage of 'love' i.e. that emotions fuel breathtaking stanzas...how can you be an exception to that!

Your memories are buried In the bottom of my heart Like a volcano, it's erupting And consuming me forever...................touching lines, it's very impressive pom, well wrote Rini Shibu.

iceberg of loneliness LOVELY METAPHOR something like unrequited love sad but expressed very well have you read some of mine in my new garb do read Rinni miss

Rini, such a good poem...10+++