(((A flower would live a long time
if it knew how to protect itself by thorns
Girls would have been very much forward
if they were able to free themselves
from the belief of subjugation)))
Burned and died;
Now accused persons
Living curse
Kerosene
Burned pious conscience
Set freed sin
Still alive
Ignorant era
In blind faith!
Death angel
Descends depraved mind
For killing!
Molestation!
Shame; damn the master
Though holy
Licentious
Understands the honey
Without life
Bees buzzing
Awakes accomplice,
Deflowers
******
Woman, you
do not wake up man
learn yourself
wake up, wake yourself
be brave in freedom
-May 30,2019 Chattogram
(5) .........I do think she is not the only one forced by her HEADMASTER. and he is not the only headmaster, there are still many teachers from various schools in Bangladesh, I am sure about that. We as poets have important tasks and we may not behave like cowards, MAHTAB, THE GOVERNMENT MUST CHANGE. YOU CAN REVOLT.
(4) AND I DO THINK THAT YOU ARE AFRAID TO BE PUT ON FIRE TOO, IF you have written a poetical Tribute for the dead pupil. I AM SO SORRY, MAHTAB, BUT I EXPECT YOU AS A POET TO CREATE an ENTIRE DIFFERENT POEM about this dead pupil, a girl of 19 years old.
(3) BUT NO ONE was burnt with kerosene. CLEAR TO ME that the Bangladesh Society is NO USA Society, otherwise so many women would be burnt? This is truly very shameful. of the Bangladesh society. A Headmaster with an honourable task and job, must treat his pupils with honour and pride. HE MUST BE PUT ON FIRE. Truly.
Death angel Descends depraved mind For killing! Molestation! Shame; the master Though holy... My dear Mahtab. this is very very touching. terrible crimes in this world. your poets notes gave us a clue. what a kind of shame and sin. horrible. thank you dear Mahtab. tony
Sadness! ! ! In blind faith they kill! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A powerful poem on social issue! Thanks for sharing...............................10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
(6) I NEVER SAID THAT YOUR POEM IS BAD, BUT YOU CAN WRITE A POEM TO DEFEND WOMEN IN BANGLADESH OR NO POEM AT ALL. From the other side of the medal, this is a good poem. Please tell the OTHER SIDE TOO. THANK YOU Beforehand FOR YOUR COURAGE, MAHTAB.