Wednesday, January 21, 2015

'Molassas' Comments

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Grandma', maybe? Or
Just pure cane
No hurry', no worries; no
Pains! Methinks or knows!
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Michael Walkerjohn
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 January 2015

There is a lot going in this fascinating poem! I admire how u say 'waves break anywhere by design', makes me tink of God's intelligent design, be it the breakers or the cresting waves and all thats nature. I didnt quite get what u meant by the last 3 lines but as a lady i find it a bit disconcerting. Im a lady muslim poetess u see. Do read my reply to yor recent coment too. Best wishes n cheers.

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